Exercise Three: Group e-mail haiku

A couple of weeks ago, full up with spring, I wrote a haiku and sent it off to friends and family via e-mail.  This fun haiku conversation resulted.  (You should also know my birthday was approaching.)

The buzz of bees

The bonking of beetles

The awe full smell of wisteria.

additions, transferences, spoofs, dalliances??

--christina

The following haiku came in:

The buzz of bees

The bonking of beetles

The woeful whiff of wisteria.

-Saul Griffith

Glowing in the sun

smelling like raspberries

a yellow iris.

On my rooftop deck

everything is bursting,

except the rhubarb.

-Arwen O'Reilly

The buzz of bees

The scent of flowers

Saul prefers the ocean wind.

-Tim O'Reilly

The buzzing of bees

The rhubarb's late song

Birthday's joy comes soon

-Olivia Crawford

bonking beetles

sqawking jays

hip hip hurray  - a birthday!

-Bridget Brewer